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The quality of life in large cities is decreasing Why is it decreasing And what measures can be taken to solve this problem

The quality of life in large cities is decreasing Why is it decreasing And what measures can be taken to solve this problem GM3rB
Nowadays it is growing concern that individuals in enormous cities is not leading a quality life. There are pros such as high renumaration and amenities at the same time cons also there with huge population. This essay will discuss the problem in city life and its remedial measures to reverse the trend. To commence with, the main reason for decreasing the standard life is increasing of population. the youngersters from rural areas are migrating to cities for their occupation and high life style. inaddition to that cities has adequate medical system. prime example is the renumuration, Rural areas could pay less wages which is not adequate for youngsters to live trendy life. moreover they would prefer to socialize more which is possible in cities. all the above points discussed are major concerns of people’s living in cities. The best remedial measures is developing the rural areas with all amenities such as enormous companies and shopping malls and so on, authorities should concentrate more on rural areas by developing infrastructure with elevated health care facilities and shopping malls to cover the youngsters attention. authorities should provide free space for the companies to motivate them to start in rural areas, for instance province like Quebec mainly promotes areas and providing better infrastructure to companies like amazon and google. In conclusion authorities should planned well to develop the life of people in cities at the same time rural areas also given same care to stop the migrants.
Nowadays it is growing concern that individuals in enormous
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cities
is not leading a quality
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life
. There are pros such as high
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renumaration
and amenities at the same time cons
also
there with huge population. This essay will discuss the problem in city
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life
and its remedial measures to reverse the trend.

To commence with, the main reason for decreasing the standard
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life
is increasing of population.
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the
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youngersters
from
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rural
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areas
are migrating to
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cities
for their occupation and high
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life
style.
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inaddition
to that
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cities
has adequate medical system.
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prime
example is the
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renumuration
,
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Rural
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areas
could pay
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less
wages which is not adequate for youngsters to
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live
trendy
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life
.
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moreover
they would prefer to socialize more which is possible in
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cities
.
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all
the above points discussed are major concerns of
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people
’s living in cities.

The best remedial measures is developing the
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rural
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areas
with all amenities such as enormous
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companies
and shopping malls and
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so
on, authorities should concentrate more on
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rural
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areas
by developing infrastructure with elevated health care facilities and shopping malls to cover the
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youngsters
attention.
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authorities
should provide free space for the
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companies
to motivate them to
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start
in
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rural
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areas
,
for instance
province like Quebec
mainly
promotes
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areas
and providing better infrastructure to
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companies
like
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amazon
and google.

In conclusion
authorities should
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planned
well to develop the
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life
of
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people
in
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cities
at the same time
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rural
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areas
also
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given
same care to
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stop
the migrants.
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IELTS essay The quality of life in large cities is decreasing Why is it decreasing And what measures can be taken to solve this problem

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  American English
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