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The puppy looked at me and I knew I had to help.

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The puppy looked at me and I knew I had to help. That cute dog was so pitiful and I hoped it wouldn't be taken advantage of by the thieves. So I chased after the thieves on my bicycle and yelled, "There's a dog thief here! Everyone! " Not long after, me and a few others caught the thieves and took them to the police station. The puppy was also brought home. Everyone complimented me and my boss gave me thanks. I was embarrassed but very happy. Fortunately, I made friends with that dog and played together later.
The puppy looked at me and I knew I had to
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help
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pitiful and I hoped it wouldn't
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I chased after the thieves on my bicycle and yelled,
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There's a dog thief here! Everyone!
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Not long after, me and a few others caught the thieves and took them to the police station. The puppy was
also
brought home. Everyone complimented me and my boss gave me thanks. I
was embarrassed
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IELTS essay The puppy looked at me and I knew I had to help.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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