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It was a lovely warm day when we went to the beach.

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It was a lovely warm day when we went to the beach. All of a sudden, the shops on the beach were quickly closed and we were very confused. I ran over and asked them what was going on and they quickly replied, "We've just received an alert that a tsunami is coming here in three hours so we have to hurry to get out of here. . " Hearing that I ran back and told my friends and we were ready to go home. Unfortunately, the tsunami came earlier than expected and we didn't get out in time. We were slowly sinking, but one of my friends saw some buoys in the back of the car. Finally, thanks to the buoys, we were lucky to escape and were rescued by the rescue team. It was a breath of fresh air.

It was a lovely warm day when we went to the beach. All of a sudden, the shops on the beach were quickly
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).closed, and
closed and
 we were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 confused. I ran over and asked them what was going Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).on, and
on and
 they quickly
 replied, Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
"
We've This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 received an alert that a tsunami is coming here in three hours This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 hurry to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 out of here. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
"
 Hearing that I ran back and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 my Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).friends, and
friends and
 we were ready to go home. Unfortunately, the tsunami came earlier than Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).expected, and
expected and
 we didn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 out in time. We were slowly
 sinking, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 one of my friends This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
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some
 buoys in the back of the car. Finally
, thanks to the buoys, we were lucky to escape and were rescued
 by the rescue team. It was a breath of fresh air. 