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from the treatment of water to be finished with the shipment to the reteilers. The first stage involves the water cleaning. The raw water goes through a filter, then it passes to the water softener and then, it is mixed with some chemicals. After that, the second stage takes place(evaporation and carbonation) and the liquid is heated in high temperature inside the eletric heater; the product runs through the cooling pipe to be blended with carbon dioxide. The mixing is the third step and that is the moment when the product starts spinning inside the mixing tank and the colour, taste and syrup are added to it. At this point, the chain of production is almost in the end. The drink is pushed out of the tank and the fourh stage starts with the liquid being filtered again, so that the it can be poured either into bottles or cans. Finally, the last step(packaging) is the transportation to the supermarket.

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water
 to be finished
 with the shipment to the Possible spelling mistake found.retailers
reteilers
.

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water
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 softener and then, it is mixed
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some
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starts
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added
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. The drink is pushed
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 can be poured
 either into bottles or cans. Finally
, the last step(packaging) is the transportation to the supermarket. 