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Victorious is the television show that I enjoy the most. This show is a comedic entertainer about a teenage girl named Tori Vega, who is the primary character. This storey revolves around a group of six talented buddies who study in Hollywood arts. They are only concerned with themselves and are unconcerned about anything else. Each of them has an own personality. Tori is a wonderful singer and a great helper to everyone. Cat Valentine is a happy girl who also happens to be a fantastic vocalist. Robbie is a ventriloquist who is adorable and nice. Beck is an actor who is cool and attractive, but Jade is a mean girl who is also a wonderful singer. This is the most interesting portion of the narrative, but the worst part is that the television show was short-lived. It was only broadcast for a brief time. It would be better, in my opinion, if there were more episodes.

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