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the tabular show the result of a survey by a magazine about what kind of articles people of different age group read

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The tabular chart compares the information about result of survey by magazine about the articals ready by the different age group. The data is evaulated in thousands. Overall, it is evident that, as the age grow people became least interested in trending topic and travel. However, Entertainment topic remain stable for all age group. Turning to the details, very young age group of people like to read articals like DIY (38. 2 thousand), tending topic (52. 1 thousand) and travel (51. 8 thousand). This age group of people did not like to ready lifestyle related articles. therefore only 26. 4 thousand pelople where reading lifestyle articals, whereas 38. 9 thousand people like to read entertainment articals. 26. 35 age group of people are less interested in DIY, but their most of the interest in trending toipcs and travel related articles 52. 1 thousand and 50. 9 thousand respectively. age group 36-45, almost similar interest have been seen DIY and Entertainment, meanwhile there was a mere difference of nearly 1 percent in trending topic and travel. However, 45. 6 thousand people where reading the lifestyle artical. 45-55 age group where not so active in reading articles expect entertainment. This age group have accounted nearly same for DIY, trending topics and travel articals. Nevertheless, lifestyle and entertainment have accounted 37. 8 thousand and 42. 8 thousand respectively.
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remain stable for all
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like DIY (38. 2 thousand), tending
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(52. 1 thousand) and
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travel
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26. 4 thousand
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like to read entertainment
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related articles 52. 1 thousand and 50. 9 thousand
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age
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36-45, almost similar interest have been
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. 45-55
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where not
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active in reading articles
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and entertainment have accounted 37. 8 thousand and 42. 8 thousand
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IELTS essay the tabular show the result of a survey by a magazine about what kind of articles people of different age group read

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