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The process shows the process of making cherry jam.

The process shows the process of making cherry jam. 1kjwy

The pictures show the stages in the process of making cherry jam. There are nine stages in the process, beginning with picking the cherries from the tree and ending with putting them in the jars First, the sheet is spread on the ground and the tree is shaken to get cherries. Then, the cherries are collected and transported to the processing plant. The leaves and stems are removed and the cherries are washed. After the stone is taken out of the middle of the cherry. they are cooked and extra sugar, pectin, lemon juice are added. In the next stages, the quality of the jam is checked and it is put into jars. Finally, a label is struck on the jars

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cherries
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First
, the sheet is spread
 on the ground and the tree is shaken
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
. Then, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are collected
 and transported to the processing plant. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
 and stems are removed
 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are washed
. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 the stone is taken
 out of the middle of the cherry. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThey
they
are cooked
 and extra sugar, pectin, lemon juice are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. In the next
 stages, the quality of the jam is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 and it is put
 into jars. Finally
, a label is struck
 on the jars