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The process shows the liquid chocolate produced in different region.

The process shows the liquid chocolate produced in different region. L9J7p

Overall, it is crystal clear that, this process a consist of ten stages which initiates how to coca tree make ripe red pods and culminates at wet chocolate produced. At the fleeting glance, coca tree are constantly grown by three various countries like America, Africa and Indonesia. When red pods are fully grown then this pods are harvested by farmers. Next to it, White Coca beans are fermented from red pods. Subsequently, raw beans are spread in sun for dried. After that, filled large amount of dried beans put in sacks and it transported by trains and lorries on the factories. Then, this beans are roasted on particular temperature. Interestingly, spit roasted beans are crushed for outer shells eliminate in the machines. In the last step, inner part of beans are pressed. Then liquor chocolate has produced by various steps,

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clear
 that, this process a consist of ten stages which initiates how to coca tree This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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pods
 and culminates at wet chocolate produced. At the fleeting glance, coca tree are constantly
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When
 red You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcapsulehuskskin
pods
 are fully
 grown then Did you mean "these"?these
this
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pods
are harvested
 by farmers. Next
 to it, White Coca You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are fermented
 from red You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcapsulehuskskin
pods
. Subsequently
, raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are spread
 in sun for dried. After that, filled large amount of dried You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 put in sacks and it transported by trains and lorries on the factories. Then, Did you mean "these"?these
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are roasted
 on particular temperature. Interestingly
, spit roasted You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are crushed
 for outer shells eliminate in the machines. In the last step, inner part of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are pressed
. Then liquor chocolate has produced by various steps, 