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the process of production of sugar by using sugarcane

the process of production of sugar by using sugarcane D210a

Sugar is produced using sugarcane as the main ingredient and its juice is extracted and converted to sugar with numerous machines. It is explicit from the process that firstly, sugarcane is sowed on massive farms and it takes approximately 1-1. 5 years to be in its harvesting phase, thereafter, it is harvested either with various machines or labours do it on their own. In the next phase, the sugarcane is crushed to extract its juice by using the crushing machine, even though the juice is fresh, it is purified by using a limestone filter which helps to eliminate impurities. To convert the juice to syrup it needs to be evaporated by using heat as the medium which makes the juice thicker. Furthermore, centrifugation of syrup is done that helps in separating sugar crystals from syrup and later on, the sugar is transferred to containers for the process of cooling and drying at room temperature. The overall phenomenon of manufacturing sugar from sugarcane takes place in gigantic sugar industries at an economical level.

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Sugar
is produced
 using sugarcane as the main ingredient and its You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
is extracted
 and converted to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 with numerous machines.

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, sugarcane is sowed
 on massive farms and it takes approximately 1-1. 5 years to be in its harvesting phase, thereafter, it is harvested
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labours
 do it on their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
. In the next
 phase, the sugarcane is crushed
 to extract its You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 by using the crushing machine, even though
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 is fresh, it is purified
 by using a limestone filter which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to eliminate impurities.

To convert the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 to syrup it needs to be evaporated
 by using heat as the medium which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 thicker. Furthermore
, Possible spelling mistake found.gentrification
centrifugation
 of syrup is done
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helps
 in separating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 crystals from syrup and later on, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
is transferred
 to containers for the process of cooling and drying at room temperature.

The overall
 phenomenon of manufacturing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 from sugarcane takes place in gigantic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 industries at an economical level. 