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Library is no longer needed because vast information is available online

Library is no longer needed because vast information is available online mbMG1
The Internet plays a vital role in everyone's life. Nowadays, students emphasize more on online platforms such as Google to obtain any information. In today's world, libraries are considered ~an~ unnecessary thing~s~. I completely agree with this statement. This essay will argue why obtaining information online is better than obtaining it from the library. Accessing information on online platforms is effortless. The Internet is the basic thing required students can then search and get the results instantly. Secondly, not only education but a wide variety of pieces of information are readily available. The good thing is that most of the articles are up-to-date which can be beneficial for the students. Online surfing can be done at any time of the day. For instance, last year I was occupied with work and hence could not find time to complete my school project during the day but all thanks to the internet for saving my student life because of 24/7 internet access I could surf the internet late at night and could focus and submit my project on time. On the other side, spending time in libraries can be time-consuming. Students will need to go through many books to find the most appropriate information and there might still be chances of not receiving one. Moreover, libraries may contain outdated books which might be less beneficial for the existing students. Furthermore, students will need to have a library card to enter or withdraw any book, material or magazine. At times there are no books available on the bookshelves and then students end up purchasing new books or checking online. To conclude, obtaining information online is an absolute imperative that is entirely justified than a library.
The Internet plays a vital role in everyone's life. Nowadays,
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students
emphasize more on
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online
platforms such as Google to obtain any
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information
. In
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today
's world, libraries
are considered
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~an~
unnecessary
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thing~s~
. I completely
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agree
with this statement. This essay will argue why obtaining
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information
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online
is better than obtaining it from the library.

Accessing
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information
on
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online
platforms is effortless. The Internet is the basic thing required
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students
can then search and
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get
the results
instantly
.
Secondly
, not
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only
education
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but
a wide variety of pieces of
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information
are
readily
available. The
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good
thing is that most of the articles are up-to-date which can be beneficial for the
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students
.
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Online
surfing can
be done
at any
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time
of the day.
For instance
, last year I
was occupied
with work and
hence
could not find
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time
to complete my school project during the day
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but
all thanks to the internet for saving my
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student
life
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because
of 24/7 internet access I could surf the internet late at night and could focus and submit my project on time.

On the other side, spending
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time
in libraries can be time-consuming.
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Students
will need to go through
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many
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books
to find the most appropriate
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information
and there might
still
be chances of not receiving one.
Moreover
, libraries may contain outdated
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books
which might be less beneficial for the existing
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students
.
Furthermore
,
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students
will need to have a library card to enter or withdraw any
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book
, material or magazine. At
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times
there are no
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books
available on the bookshelves and then
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students
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end
up purchasing new
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books
or checking online.

To conclude
, obtaining
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information
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online
is an absolute imperative
that is
entirely
justified than a library.
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IELTS essay Library is no longer needed because vast information is available online

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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