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Some girls want that boys respect them but they don’t want to respect boys? Explain ?

Some girls want that boys respect them but they don’t want to respect boys? Explain? R2AMY
In modern Era, Girls and boys are same. There are no difference seen in both genders. In present time, Most of the girls do not respect the boys but there are some reason behind that. I will discuss the reason in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, In education institute, mostly boys disrespect the girls just because of their fun. This is not good thing because girls is like a sister for boys. Moving further, Most of the boys are insane and they go educational institute in school just for entertainment and making new friends. In that case, Sometimes they disrespect a girl in the whole class. In that case, Girl feel insulted and also hurt and they become mentally harassed because girls are possessive for their feeling. On the contrary, Some boys are not like other. They behave like a good person and play vital role in their life. There are many type of girl which disrespect the boys directly or indirectly. As a result, they want that boy should respect them. In the conclusion, I believe that both boys and girls respect each other. Because for study purpose boys and girls share their ideas with each other and help them in every impossible situation.
In modern Era,
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and
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are same. There are no difference
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in both genders. In present time, Most of the
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do not respect the
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boys
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there are
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reason behind that. I will discuss the reason in the upcoming paragraphs.

To commence with, In education institute,
mostly
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boys
disrespect the
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girls
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of their fun. This is not
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good
thing
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because
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girls
is like a sister for
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. Moving
further
, Most of the
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are
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insane and
they go educational institute in school
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just
for entertainment and making new friends.
In that case
,
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Sometimes
they disrespect a
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girl
in the whole
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class
.
In that case
,
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feel insulted and
also
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hurt and
they become mentally harassed
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because
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girls
are possessive for their feeling.

On the contrary
,
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Some
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are not like other. They behave like a
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good
person and play vital role in their life. There are
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many type
of
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girl
which disrespect the
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boys
directly
or
indirectly
.
As a result
, they want that
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boy
should respect them.

In the conclusion, I believe that both
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boys
and
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girls
respect each other.
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Because
for study purpose
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boys
and
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girls
share their
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ideas
with each other and
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help
them in every impossible situation.
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IELTS essay Some girls want that boys respect them but they don’t want to respect boys? Explain?

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4 paragraphs
206 words
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