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spending time for sports or cultural activities

spending time for sports or cultural activities XEAgY

Spending less time in doing sports versus cultural activities like music and theatre is not a good idea for young people. Cultural activities have some benefits not only for young but also for other ages. Likewise, spending time on sport activities have useful effects in anyone's higyne. In modern societies, many situations like works, personal lives, educational periods and etc. make people busy and maybe nerves. For releasing daily stresses spending time in concert, watching movie in cinema and some entertainments like those is essential and beneficial. On the other hand, doing sports have major benefits in human health.

Spending less time in doing sports versus cultural activities like music and Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.theater
theatre
 is not a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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idea
 for young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Cultural activities have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 benefits not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for young This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 for other ages. Likewise
, spending time on sport activities have useful effects in anyone's Possible spelling mistake found.haüyne
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. In modern societies, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 situations like works, personal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
, educational periods Write the name of the item after 'and' or use only "etc".etc
and etc
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 busy and maybe nerves. For releasing daily This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuates
stresses
 spending time in concert, watching movie in cinema and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 entertainments like those is essential and beneficial. On the other hand
, doing sports have major benefits in human health. 