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The process of manufacturing tomato ketchup

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The pictures illustrate different stage in the process of manufacturing tomato ketchup. Overall, there are number of stage undertaken, starting with collecting tomatos, through different transportation, cooking and packaging steps and culminating in using in the final stage. The first stage of the process startes when tomatoes is pick and put in basket by farmer, pior to being sorted by hand to classify the good and bad tomatoes. After which, it is transported to the factory by car. Having been remove all skin, seeds and staik, tomatos was put into the container The process continues when tomatoes was crushed in the container and then blend with some spice including sugar, vinegar and salt and that mixture was boiled. After being left in 2 hours, ketchup was pour into the bottle, subsequently it was labelling. Quality of letchup was checked again before being packaged in the box and carried to the supermaket. Finally, ketchup was consumes such as eating with hamburger and fries.
The pictures illustrate
different
stage in the process of manufacturing tomato ketchup.

Overall
, there are number of stage undertaken, starting with collecting
tomatos
, through
different
transportation, cooking and packaging steps and culminating
in using in
the final stage.

The
first
stage of the process
startes
when tomatoes
is
pick and put in basket by farmer,
pior
to
being sorted
by hand to classify the
good
and
bad
tomatoes. After which, it
is transported
to the factory by car. Having been remove all skin, seeds and
staik
,
tomatos
was put
into the
container


The process continues when tomatoes
was crushed
in the container and then blend with
some
spice including sugar, vinegar and salt and that mixture
was boiled
. After being
left
in 2 hours, ketchup was
pour
into the bottle,
subsequently
it was labelling. Quality of
letchup
was
checked
again
before
being packaged
in the box and carried to the
supermaket
.
Finally
, ketchup was consumes such as eating with hamburger and fries.
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IELTS essay The process of manufacturing tomato ketchup

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4 paragraphs
162 words
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