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The process of making milk and cheese

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The given diagrm illuatrates the man-made procesa tht way for milk is processed and produced the cheese, cream and butter for sale to consumer. Overall, there are eight- stages in this linear process, beginning with cows grazing in the fild and culminating in delivering in super marets and shops. To begin with, cows graze in the fild, after that they are taken into milking maching to be milked twice a day. The milk is placed in refrigeration storage and it is then transferred in milk tanker for delivery to dairy on daily bases. Followed by, once the milk is delivered to dairy it is subsequently put into pateurisation process. In subsequence stage, the milk is tuned in to different products such as cheese, cream and butter as well as the milk is packed in to bottels and crans. Finally, as soon as the dairy products and milk have been procuced and processed, they are then sent out to supermaket and shops where they are displayed and ready to purchase by customer.
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milk
is processed
and produced the cheese, cream and butter for sale to consumer.
Overall
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fild
and culminating
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in delivering in
super
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marets
and shops.

To
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with, cows graze in the
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fild
, after that they
are taken
into milking
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maching
to
be milked
twice a day. The
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milk
is placed
in refrigeration storage and it is then transferred in
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milk
tanker for delivery to dairy on daily bases. Followed by, once the
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milk
is delivered
to dairy it is
subsequently
put into
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pateurisation
process.

In subsequence stage, the
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milk
is tuned
in to
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different
products such as cheese, cream and butter
as well
as the
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milk
is packed
in to
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bottels
and
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crans
.
Finally
, as
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soon
as the dairy products and
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milk
have been
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procuced
and processed, they are then
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sent
out to
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supermaket
and shops where they
are displayed
and ready to
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purchase
by customer.
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IELTS essay The process of making milk and cheese

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
171 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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