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the process of formation and development of gender roles. As a result, that creates the stereotype between genders.

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It is often said that gender roles aim at setting boundaries what is perceived as appropriate for men and women. According to the article” Growing up male and female”, the author pointed ou It is often said that gender roles aim at setting boundaries what is perceived as appropriate for men and women. According to the article” Growing up male and female”, the author pointed out the process of formation and development of gender roles. As a result, that creates the stereotype between genders. These roles of gender form and play an essential part in individual identity. Most youngsters start showing their personal identity at around 2 to 3 years of aged. Kids not only foster the norms of sexual behavior and appearance, but also construct characteristics roles in their youthful minds. Through the utilization of toys and clothing, children are socialized into their “appropriate” gender. It was found that parents rated the most appropriate behaviors for girls as playing with dolls, dressing in pink. Contrary to boys behaviour were boidly activities such as playing with the blocks, wearing in blue. In addition, the way parents talk to girls more politely than boys. Moreover, it is not acceptable for masculinity to demonstrate too much emotion and cry, femininity should submissive and weak. If sons show just a little of our emotions, society will automatically look down on them as weak, gay. Young people are greatly conscious of the stereotypes that are applied to gender by this age. There are numerous ways that adolescents learn and develop gender roles such as through socialisation with parents, peers. Parents’ roles inside and outside the family also strongly influence children’s conception of gender roles. They are more protective of their daughters and give their sons more independent. Thefore, girls are expected to remain at home and manage all the household duties. Compared to women, men carry out these duties performed the status which they were granted in societies. Another vital way which children learn about gender is through interactions with peers. They study about gender stereotypes through their peers’ direct comments: long hair, emotional connection and shared secrets are for girls while short hair, competitive and dominant behaviors are for boys. Nowadays, gender- neutral is quite common. It makes boys feel free to express their feelings whereas girls hold an important position in societies. My parents always treat my brother and me different. We are 27 months apart, and he is allowed to go anyplace, with who ever whenever. He has been done this since he was younger than what I am curently. I used to argue with my parents why I must go home before 8pm and rarely get permission from my parents to go out. From my standpoint, girls and boys should be treated equally and be open to the same opportunities as one and other. We are not going to explore about the world if you can’t try new things without a sibling or parent to help us along the way and hindered by gender. These roles of gender form and play an essential part in individual identity. Most youngsters start showing their personal identity at around 2 to 3 years of aged. Kids not only foster the norms of sexual behavior and appearance, but also construct characteristics roles in their youthful minds. Through the utilization of toys and clothing, children are socialized into their “appropriate” gender. It was found that parents rated the most appropriate behaviors for girls as playing with dolls, dressing in pink. Contrary to boys behaviour were boidly activities such as playing with the blocks, wearing in blue. In addition, the way parents talk to girls more politely than boys. Moreover, it is not acceptable for masculinity to demonstrate too much emotion and cry, femininity should submissive and weak. If sons show just a little of our emotions, society will automatically look down on them as weak, gay. Young people are greatly conscious of the stereotypes that are applied to gender by this age. There are numerous ways that adolescents learn and develop gender roles such as through socialisation with parents, peers. Parents’ roles inside and outside the family also strongly influence children’s conception of gender roles. They are more protective of their daughters and give their sons more independent. Thefore, girls are expected to remain at home and manage all the household duties. Compared to women, men carry out these duties performed the status which they were granted in societies. Another vital way which children learn about gender is through interactions with peers. They study about gender stereotypes through their peers’ direct comments: long hair, emotional connection and shared secrets are for girls while short hair, competitive and dominant behaviors are for boys. Nowadays, gender- neutral is quite common. It makes boys feel free to express their feelings whereas girls hold an important position in societies. My parents always treat my brother and me different. We are 27 months apart, and he is allowed to go anyplace, with who ever whenever. He has been done this since he was younger than what I am curently. I used to argue with my parents why I must go home before 8pm and rarely get permission from my parents to go out. From my standpoint, girls and boys should be treated equally and be open to the same opportunities as one and other. We are not going to explore about the world if you can’t try new things without a sibling or parent to help us along the way and hindered by gender.
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often
said that gender
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roles
aim at setting boundaries what
is perceived
as
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appropriate
for
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men
and
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women
. According to the article” Growing up male and female”, the author pointed
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It is
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often
said that gender
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roles
aim at setting boundaries what
is perceived
as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
appropriate
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
men
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
. According to the article” Growing up male and female”, the author pointed out the process of formation and development of gender
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roles
.
As a result
, that creates the
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stereotype
between genders.

These
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roles
of gender form and play an essential part in individual
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identity
. Most youngsters
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start
showing their personal
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identity
at around 2 to 3 years of aged. Kids not
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only
foster the norms of sexual
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behavior
and appearance,
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but
also
construct characteristics
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roles
in their youthful minds.
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Through
the utilization of toys and clothing,
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children
are socialized
into their
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“appropriate”
gender. It
was found
that
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parents
rated the most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
appropriate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
behaviors
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
playing
with dolls, dressing in pink. Contrary to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
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behaviour
were
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boidly
activities such as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
playing
with the blocks, wearing in blue.
In addition
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
way
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
talk to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
more
politely
than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
.
Moreover
, it is not acceptable for masculinity to demonstrate too much
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emotion
and cry, femininity
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should submissive
and
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weak
. If
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sons
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show
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just
a
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little
of our
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emotions
,
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society
will
automatically
look down on them as
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weak
, gay. Young
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are
greatly
conscious of the
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stereotypes
that
are applied
to gender by this age.

There are numerous
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ways
that adolescents
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learn
and develop gender
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roles
such as
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through
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socialisation
with
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parents
,
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peers
.
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Parents’
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roles
inside and outside the family
also
strongly
influence
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children’s
conception of gender
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roles
. They are more protective of their daughters and give their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sons
more independent.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Thefore
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
to remain at home and manage all the household
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
duties
. Compared to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
men
carry out these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
duties
performed the status which they
were granted
in
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societies
. Another vital
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way
which
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children
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learn
about gender is
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through
interactions with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
peers
. They study about gender
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stereotypes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
through
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
peers’
direct comments: long
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hair
, emotional connection and shared secrets are for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
while short
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hair
, competitive and dominant
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
behaviors
are for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
. Nowadays, gender- neutral is quite common. It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
feel free to express their feelings whereas
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
hold an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
position in societies.

My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
always treat my brother and me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
. We are 27 months apart, and he is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
to go anyplace, with who ever whenever. He has
been done
this since he was younger than what I am
Possible spelling mistake found.
curently
. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to argue with my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
why I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
go home
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
8pm and rarely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
permission from my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
to go out. From my standpoint,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
should
be treated
equally
and be open to the same opportunities as one and other. We are not going to explore about the world if you can’t try new things without a sibling or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parent
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
us along the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
way
and hindered by gender.

These
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roles
of gender form and play an essential part in individual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
identity
. Most youngsters
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
showing their personal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
identity
at around 2 to 3 years of aged. Kids not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
foster the norms of sexual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
behavior
and appearance,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
construct characteristics
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roles
in their youthful minds.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Through
the utilization of toys and clothing,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
are socialized
into their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
“appropriate”
gender. It
was found
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
rated the most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
appropriate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
behaviors
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
playing
with dolls, dressing in pink. Contrary to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.
behaviour
were
Possible spelling mistake found.
boidly
activities such as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
playing
with the blocks, wearing in blue.
In addition
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
way
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
talk to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
more
politely
than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
.
Moreover
, it is not acceptable for masculinity to demonstrate too much
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
emotion
and cry, femininity
The word 'submissive' is a noun or an adjective. A verb is missing or misspelled, or maybe a comma is missing.
should submissive
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weak
. If
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sons
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
of our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
emotions
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
will
automatically
look down on them as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weak
, gay. Young
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are
greatly
conscious of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stereotypes
that
are applied
to gender by this age.

There are numerous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ways
that adolescents
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
and develop gender
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roles
such as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
through
Possible spelling mistake. 'socialisation' is British English.
socialisation
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
peers
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Parents’
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roles
inside and outside the family
also
strongly
influence
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children’s
conception of gender
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roles
. They are more protective of their daughters and give their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sons
more independent.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Thefore
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
to remain at home and manage all the household
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
duties
. Compared to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
men
carry out these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
duties
performed the status which they
were granted
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
societies
. Another vital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
way
which
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
about gender is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
through
interactions with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
peers
. They study about gender
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stereotypes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
through
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
peers’
direct comments: long
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hair
, emotional connection and shared secrets are for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
while short
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hair
, competitive and dominant
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
behaviors
are for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
. Nowadays, gender- neutral is quite common. It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
feel free to express their feelings whereas
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
hold an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
position in societies.

My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
always treat my brother and me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
. We are 27 months apart, and he is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
to go anyplace, with who ever whenever. He has
been done
this since he was younger than what I am
Possible spelling mistake found.
curently
. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to argue with my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
why I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
go home
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
8pm and rarely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
permission from my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
to go out. From my standpoint,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
should
be treated
equally
and be open to the same opportunities as one and other. We are not going to explore about the world if you can’t try new things without a sibling or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parent
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
us along the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
way
and hindered by gender.

IELTS essay the process of formation and development of gender roles. As a result, that creates the stereotype between genders.

Essay
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924 words
5.0
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