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The process illustrates the main stages which take place in chocolate production.

The process illustrates the main stages which take place in chocolate production. yNNgl

The process illustrates the main stages which take place in chocolate production. Overall, it can be seen that there are ten main stages of the process, starting from collecting the pods. At the first stage of the process, ripe red seeds from cacao trees mainly grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia are harvested before being taken white cocoa beans inside the red pods. After that, the quick fermentation is done and laid in big flat woods until it is dried by the sunlight. Once it is ready, the dried seeds are packed into large sacks in order to be moved to a factory in which the industrial production happens by train or lorry. At the following stage, the whole beans is roasted in a big oven by over 350*C to easily break the brown red pods outside the beans. Having poured in the beans crusher, the outer shells which are very hard to remove quickly fall out and become the complete seeds. Before travelling to the seller or chocolate makers, these beans are pressed in a roller machine to produce liquid chocolate.

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stages
 which take place in chocolate production.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that there are ten main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
 of the process, starting from collecting the pods.

At the first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 of the process, ripe red seeds from cacao trees mainly
 grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia are harvested
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before
being taken
 white cocoa You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 inside the red pods. After that, the quick fermentation is done
 and laid in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 flat woods until it is dried
 by the sunlight. Once it is ready, the dried seeds are packed
 into large sacks in order to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to a factory in which the industrial production happens by train or lorry.

At the following You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, the whole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
is roasted
 in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 oven by over

Replace by the typographical symbol.350×C350·C
350*C
 to easily
 break the brown red pods outside the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
. Having poured in the Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "beans'" or "bean's"?beans'bean's
beans
 crusher, the outer shells which are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to remove quickly
 fall out and become the complete seeds. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 travelling to the seller or chocolate makers, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are pressed
 in a roller machine to produce liquid chocolate. 