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The process illustrates newspaper can is made

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In general there are main six stages of making paper from cutting down a tree and endings with paper making machine At the first stage of process the trees are cut down from the greenery by people. Next people take away to the De barking and they are first cleaned and grinded at the this stage. After that products are chipped from machine. There are 3 process in screening and cleaning. They are: mechanical pulping process, chemical pulping and hydrapulper. Finally products will by sent at the finished stage

In general
 there are main six You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
 of making paper from cutting down a tree and endings with paper making machine At the first
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stage
 of process the trees are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down from the greenery by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Next
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people
 take away to the Possible spelling mistake found.DEHeWeBeMeDue
De
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).barking, and
barking and
 they are first
 cleaned and Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "ground", the past tense form of the verb 'grind'?groundgrindergrinned
grinded
 at Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only "the" or "this" is left.thethis
the this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 that products are chipped
 from machine. There are 3 process in screening and cleaning. They are: mechanical pulping process, chemical pulping and Possible spelling mistake found.
hydrapulper
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 products will Did you maybe mean "buy" or "be"?buybe
by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 at the finished Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphstage.stage!stage?stage:stage,stage;
stage