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The process illustrates newspaper can is made

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In general there are main six stages of making paper from cutting down a tree and endings with paper making machine At the first stage of process the trees are cut down from the greenery by people. Next people take away to the De barking and they are first cleaned and grinded at the this stage. After that products are chipped from machine. There are 3 process in screening and cleaning. They are: mechanical pulping process, chemical pulping and hydrapulper. Finally products will by sent at the finished stage
In general
there are main six
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stages
of making paper from cutting down a tree and endings with paper making machine At the
first
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stage
of process the trees are
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cut
down from the greenery by
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people
.
Next
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people
take away to the
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De
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barking and
they are
first
cleaned and
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grinded
at
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the this
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stage
.
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After
that products
are chipped
from machine. There are 3 process in screening and cleaning. They are: mechanical pulping process, chemical pulping and
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hydrapulper
.
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Finally
products will
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by
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sent
at the finished
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stage

IELTS essay The process illustrates newspaper can is made

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
88 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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