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Crime is sincresind day bu day reasond acuses,

Crime is sincresind day bu day reasond acuses, 5L38p
It is truly believe that underdeveloped Nations are facing numerous comics and social difficulties due to this there are certain masses who considered that it is responsibility of wealthy Nations to provide necessary assistance to improve our country for the both views are to be and light in the positivity paragraph On the one hand there are plethora of benefits providing support to known happy Nation's first and the foremost reason is international aid given to poor countries can help them in poverty environment in the health issue to justify Global chat is fund about them to provide a good education to poor as in which they must make the future Baithe also give more job opportunities to youngster in which day can cadre to their basic needs also many nations of the world are affected by tourism these days are not capable to fight a long it is duty of Advanced countries to joint hand with pen Nation to take the problem On the other hand, it is also believed that banning tourism have no benefits for some reason most importantly tourism boost economy of a nation it creates employment in services like accommodation transportation and job opportunities. To Inteed, thousand of humans travel to see Taj Mahal every year it generates huge revenue for local bodies. secondly, with the aid of foreign tourism ones can gain a lot of knowledge about their culture and tradition which will be beneficial for city masses how to deal with them in their To conclude after having multiple both expect of decision it is quite diet although both have pros and cons but however I personally believe that given financial support to poor countries is more beneficial
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truly
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believe
that underdeveloped
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Nations
are facing numerous comics and social difficulties due to this there are certain masses who considered that it is responsibility of wealthy
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Nations
to provide necessary assistance to
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improve
our
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country
for the both views are to be and light in the positivity paragraph

On the one hand there are plethora of benefits providing support to known happy Nation's
first
and the foremost reason is international aid
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given
to poor
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countries
can
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help
them in poverty environment in the health issue to justify Global chat is fund about them to provide a
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good
education to poor as in which they
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must
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make
the future
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also
give more job opportunities to youngster in which day can cadre to their basic needs
also
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nations
of the world are
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affected
by
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tourism
these days are not capable to fight a long it is duty of Advanced
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countries
to joint hand with pen
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Nation
to take the problem

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believed that banning
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tourism
have no benefits for
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importantly
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tourism
boost economy of a
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it creates employment in services like accommodation transportation and job opportunities. To
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Inteed
,
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of humans travel to
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see
Taj Mahal every year it generates huge revenue for local bodies.
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secondly
, with the aid of foreign
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tourism
ones can gain
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a lot of
knowledge about their culture and tradition which will be beneficial for city masses how to deal with them in their

To conclude
after having multiple both
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expect
of decision it is quite diet although both have pros and cons
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personally
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financial support to poor
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IELTS essay Crime is sincresind day bu day reasond acuses,

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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