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The presented designs below compares the present university’s sport center as well as the appearance after renovation.

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The presented designs below compares the present university’s sport center as well as the appearance after renovation. Overall, there are a lot of changes and additional amenities for future plan of the University sports center. As well as widening of the sport center is one of their top priority in the future. According to the prospect plan, redevelopment of university sports center includes the expanding of the area wherein two outdoor courts which are located on west and east side of the stadium at present, will be diminish as part of the plan in the future. Furthermore, Additional facilities are added such as 2 dance studios with equal size of each room which will be found on the east part of the sport center as well as, leisure pool that can be used for other athletes is situated on the west part on the sport center beside the 2 changing rooms. Though, at present time there is no food outlet that can be found inside the center however in the future, they are planning to add a café near the entrance area just before the reception.

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 center as well
 as the appearance after renovation.

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 center. As well
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sport
 center is one of their top priority in the future.

According to the prospect plan, redevelopment of university You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 center includes the expanding of the area wherein two outdoor courts which are located
 on west and east side of the stadium at present, will be Consider using the past participle "diminished"?diminished
diminish
 as part of the plan in the future.

Furthermore
, Additional facilities are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
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 on the east part of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sport
 center as well
 as, leisure pool that can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for other athletes is situated
 on the west part on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sport
 center beside the 2 changing rooms. Though, at present time there is no food outlet that can be found
 inside the center however
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add
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before
 the reception. 