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The positive trend of International tourism

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There is a myriad of benefits when it comes to international tourism. On the one hand, in terms of local residents, being able to operate services, namely hotels, restaurants, and even souvenir stores are attributable to more job opportunities for local people. Furthermore, by the assistance of international tourism, not only local citizens have the chance to exhibit their rich cultures and traditional sights but also can make decent incomes out of it. For instance, international visitors of Venice spread the fame of it and even spend their own money in order to enjoy it there. On the other hand, in terms of international sightseers themselves, having adventurous visitings beyond borders and among new people can lead to new connections and friendships with their counterparts which could end up with marvelous sightseeing. Moreover, traveling in different environments and cities, such as historical or modern ones seemingly can provide excellent experience and information. For example, international tourists in Athens acquire better knowledge and experience about that area compared with the ones that did not attend to visit there. Thereby, the benefits of international tourists can outshine its drawbacks and will pay dividends.
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decent incomes out of it.
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visitors of Venice spread the fame of it and even spend their
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own
money in order to enjoy it there.
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sightseers themselves, having adventurous
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visitings
beyond borders and among new
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people
can lead to new connections and friendships with their counterparts which could
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up with marvelous sightseeing.
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, traveling in
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different
environments and cities, such as historical or modern
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can provide excellent experience and information.
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,
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international
tourists in Athens acquire better knowledge and experience about that area compared with the
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ones
that did not attend to visit there. Thereby, the benefits of
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tourists can outshine its drawbacks and will pay dividends.
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IELTS essay The positive trend of International tourism

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
191 words
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