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The plans provide information about the structure of an airport now and how it will be after a reconstruction a year later.

The plans provide information about the structure of an airport now and how it will be after a reconstruction a year later. KGLkM
The plans provide information about the structure of an airport now and how it will be after a reconstruction a year later. Overall, the airport will witness a dramatic development. It only has 8 gates now, whereas the number will increase to 18 in the future. On top of that, myriads of facilities will be built in the airport. The place now has two separate sections, departures and arrivals with one entry respectively. In the departures segment, there is a café in the right corner near to the security passport control which is located in the middle of the room. On the left hand is the check-in service. The eight gates can be found behind the security passport control. In addition, there is also a walkway to connect the gates. In the other section, there is only a passport control customs. A year later, the sections will remain the same, however, both of them will have two entries. In the departures, the café will be replaced by check-in, and a new café will be constructed in the left corner near to exit. A new service called bag drop will replace the old check-in. A shop will also be available after the security passport control. A sky train will connect the 18 gates. Three new facilities, car hire, ATM and café will be built in the arrivals room.
The plans provide information about the structure of an airport
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now
and how it will be after a reconstruction a year later.

Overall
, the airport will witness a dramatic development. It
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only
has 8
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gates
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now
, whereas the number will increase to 18 in the future.
On top of that
, myriads of facilities will
be built
in the airport.

The place
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now
has two separate sections, departures and arrivals with one entry
respectively
. In the departures segment, there is a café in the right corner near to the security
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passport
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control
which
is located
in the middle of the room. On the
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left
hand is the
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check
-in service. The eight
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gates
can
be found
behind the security
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passport
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control
.
In addition
, there is
also
a walkway to connect the
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gates
. In the other section, there is
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only
a
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passport
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control
customs.

A year later, the sections will remain the same,
however
, both of them will have two entries. In the departures, the café will
be replaced
by
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check
-in, and a new café will
be constructed
in the
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left
corner near to exit. A new service called bag drop will replace the
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old
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check
-in. A shop will
also
be available after the security
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passport
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
control
.
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A
sky train will connect the 18
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gates
. Three new facilities, car hire, ATM and café will
be built
in the arrivals room.
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IELTS essay The plans provide information about the structure of an airport now and how it will be after a reconstruction a year later.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
227 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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