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The plans illustrate the current layout of a university sports complex and proposals for its redevelopment.

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The plans illustrate the current layout of a university sports complex and proposals for its redevelopment. Overall, the university sports centre is expected to become much bigger with new recreational facilities planned such as dance studios, a leisure pool, shops and a sports hall. At present, behind the reception area, there is a 25-metre indoor pool with a changing room and a seating area on either side, including a gym toward the rear of the building. In addition, there are two separate outdoor courts adjacent to the main building on the east and west side. Regarding future plans, the outdoor courts are set to be removed and the building is planned to be upgraded to a self-contained sports facility. The current pool is going to remain as it is and a large leisure pool with a changing room is expected to be built in the west wing. A proposed sports centre in the east wing will include dance studios and a changing room. There are also proposals for a sports shop and a cafe in the reception area.
The plans illustrate the
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current
layout of a university
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sports
complex and proposals for its redevelopment.
Overall
, the university
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sports
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centre
is
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expected
to become much bigger with new recreational facilities planned such as dance studios, a leisure
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pool
, shops and a
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sports
hall.

At present, behind the reception area, there is a
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25-metre
indoor
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pool
with a changing room and a seating area on either side, including a gym toward the rear of the building.
In addition
, there are two separate outdoor courts adjacent to the main building on the east and west side.

Regarding future plans, the outdoor courts
are set
to
be removed
and the building
is planned
to
be upgraded
to a self-contained
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sports
facility. The
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current
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pool
is going to remain as it is and a large leisure
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pool
with a changing room is
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expected
to
be built
in the west wing. A proposed
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sports
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centre
in the east wing will include dance studios and a changing room. There are
also
proposals for a
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sports
shop and a
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cafe
in the reception area.
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IELTS essay The plans illustrate the current layout of a university sports complex and proposals for its redevelopment.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
178 words
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