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The illustration shows the steps of the production of electric energy via the flow of water through the power generator.

The illustration shows the steps of the production of electric energy via the flow of water through the power generator. YLW9B
The illustration shows the steps of the production of electric energy via the flow of water through the power generator. The process is fundamentally the course of water from one reservoir to another which produces electricity along the way and eventually sending to the national grid. Initially, the water from the river enters the primary reservoir, the dam. In the daytime, the dam is opened and the stored water flows into the narrower waterway with speed. In turn, this speed produces energy to run the turbines which are also the generators in the power station. The electric current produced move along the power cables of the national grid. Thereafter, the residue water left the turbines and is collected in the secondary reservoir which is located in the lower level than the dam. Soon the nighttime falls and the accumulated water for whole daytime is pumped up to the dam to recycle. Nevertheless, it is the complete opposite route of the daytime and during this process no electricity is produced as the water flow slower. After all, the turbines are reversible; they are responsible for pumping water up to the higher place. Later on, the intake is closed as to prevent water from flowing back to the lower region. Eventually, the whole operation of generating water is over and all prepared to start the process again.
The illustration
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shows
the steps of the production of electric energy via the flow of
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water
through the power generator. The process is
fundamentally
the course of
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water
from one reservoir to another which produces electricity along the way and
eventually
sending to the national grid.

Initially
, the
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water
from the river enters the primary reservoir, the dam. In the daytime, the dam
is opened
and the stored
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
flows into the narrower waterway with speed. In turn, this speed produces energy to run the turbines which are
also
the generators in the power station. The electric
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current
produced
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move
along the power cables of the national grid. Thereafter, the residue
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water
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left
the turbines and
is collected
in the secondary reservoir which
is located
in the lower level than the dam.

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Soon
the nighttime falls and the accumulated
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water
for whole daytime
is pumped
up to the dam to recycle.
Nevertheless
, it is the complete opposite route of the daytime and during this process no electricity
is produced
as the
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water
flow slower.
After all
, the turbines are reversible; they are responsible for pumping
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water
up to the higher place. Later on, the intake
is closed
as to
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prevent
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water
from flowing back to the lower region.
Eventually
, the whole operation of generating
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water
is over and all prepared to
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start
the process again.
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IELTS essay The illustration shows the steps of the production of electric energy via the flow of water through the power generator.

Essay
  American English
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225 words
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