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The plans delow show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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Grange Park was opened in 1920, a rectangular area with access from Arnold Avenue on the north side and from Eldon Street on the south side. There was a fountain in the centre, with a stage for musicians situated centre left, a glasshouse to the right of the Eldon Street entrance and a pond for water plants in the north east corner opposite Around the edges of the park there were rose gardens, with seats nearby for people to smell the flowers and listen to music, The park has altered considerably since then. Now there is one large-ish rose garden occupying the central area where the fountain stood, and with seats all around it. One of the smaller rose gardens remains on the north side of the park. The bandstand (stage for musicians) has also been replaced, by an amphitheatre for concerts and associated seating. The glasshouse has gone and in its places is a water feature; similarly, where the pond for water plants stood there is now a children's play area with a café nearby. Access to the park is still via the two original entrances, but there is now a third entrance near the water feature from an underground car park. Despite the apparently significant changes, the park retains the basic elements of flowers, water, seating and music, with the addition of a café and a children's play area.

Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
was opened
 in 1920, a rectangular area with access from Arnold Avenue

on the north side and from Eldon Street on the south side. There was a fountain in the

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centre
, with a stage for musicians situated Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
, a glasshouse to the right of the

Eldon Street entrance and a pond for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 plants in the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-eastnortheast
north east
 corner opposite

Around the edges of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 there were rose gardens, with seats nearby for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people


to smell the flowers and listen to music,

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has altered considerably
 since then. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
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large-ish
 rose garden

occupying the central area where the fountain stood, and with seats all around it. One

of the smaller rose gardens remains on the north side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. The bandstand

(stage for musicians) has also
been replaced
, by an Possible spelling mistake. 'amphitheatre' is British English.amphitheater
amphitheatre
 for concerts and

associated seating. The glasshouse has gone and in its places is a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 feature;

similarly
, where the pond for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 plants stood there is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 a children's play area

with a café nearby. Access to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 is still
 via the two original entrances, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 a third entrance near the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 feature from an underground car park.

Despite the apparently
 significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 retains the basic elements of

flowers, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
, seating and music, with the addition of a café and a children's play area. 