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The plans below shows a public park when it first opened and now

The plans below shows a public park when it first opened and now 8JDYV

The first plan illustrated gives information about a public park (Grange park) in 1920 and compares it to the same park of today shown in the 2nd plan Overall, it is seen that the location o f several places in the park as at 1920 have been changed today, a lot more features have been added to the park and few removed, the only place with the same location is one of the Rose gardens. In 1920, the park had 3 Rose Gardens, a water plant pond, a stage for musicians, and a fountain. It also had a glass house and several seats for the public On the other hand, the children's play area has currently replaced the pond that was in the pond that as seen in 1920, there is also a newly added water feature where the glass house once stood in the past. The stage in 1920 have also been replaced with an amphitheatre for concerts. More noticeable is the newly added underground car park and a cafe which was not seen in the past. The area where the fountain was now houses a rose garden, there are also more seats available to the public.

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 (Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park)
 in 1920 and compares it to the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
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today
 shown in the 2nd plan

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 that the location o f several places in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
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changed
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today
, a lot more features have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 and few removed, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 place with the same location is one of the Rose gardens.

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park
 had 3 Rose Gardens, a water plant pond, a stage for musicians, and a fountain. It also
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seen
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 a newly
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added
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house
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been replaced
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amphitheatre
 for concerts. More noticeable is the newly
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added
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park
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cafe
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seen
 in the past. The area where the fountain was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
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houses
 a rose garden, there are also
 more seats available to the public. 