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Children in the present have more activities than in the past

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Tremendous development in the past few decades in a myriad of fields globally has rid young people of many previously existing duties. Nevertheless certaing group of people are suspicious about the usefulness of this alteration, whilst others have a positive perspective on it. On the one hand some hold the view that smaller number of responsibilities can give kids a sufficient amount of time to spare on their education. Rather than being busy with household chores ar assisting a parent they tend to be engaged in the hometasks given or any other kind of academic activities.
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IELTS essay Children in the present have more activities than in the past

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
96 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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