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The plans Below show the side of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison relevant

The plans Below show the side of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison relevant rbQpN
The picture illustrates the development plan of an airport for next year. it is clear that some parts of airport will be expanded and the shopping center will be available. as can be seen from picture current airport do not contain ATMs skytrain and car hire. There is just one entrance door for departures passengers should pass the passport control gate and then walk away through eight gates. the arrivals part have one exit door and have no café unlike departures part. After development the gates will be expanded from eight gates up to 18 gates. passengers will be transported by the skytrain compare with current airport which people have to walk away. certain features will be added in departures such as bag drops and there will be two entrances as well as the arrivals will have two exits and car hiring is one of the new part of airport also ATMs will be available in new plan.
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have one exit door and have no café unlike departures
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up to 18
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certain
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in departures such as bag drops and there will be two entrances
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IELTS essay The plans Below show the side of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison relevant

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158 words
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