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Describe the Place Where You Work Or Which You Often Visit

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I often visit the Mahatma Mandir Convention and Exhibition Centre in Gandhinagar. It is inspired from the life and philosophy of Mahatma Gandhi. It is one of the biggest convention centers of India spread over an area of 34 acres. Mahatma Mandir entry fee is only fifteen rupees per person and Mahatma Gandhi's birth and death till, all characters are displayed in 3D TV so this is very effective and all tourists visit the place. Mahatma Mandir’s structure is also different, which is it. A concrete dome structure is constructed representing a salt mound houses a museum, a library and a research center. A sculpture garden with stone murals depicting the life of Mahatma Gandhi is also developed. A grand spinning wheel, Charkha, is also installed. Therefore, I have suggested to human-kind you come to Gandhinagar, please visit the Mahatma Mandir. It is developed by the Government of Gujarat and the best museum ever visited in India describing the life and teachings of Mahatma Gandhi.
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Gandhi's birth and death till, all characters
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effective and all tourists visit the place.

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a museum, a library and a research center. A sculpture garden with stone murals depicting the life of
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Gandhi is
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grand spinning wheel,
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Charkha
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Gandhinagar
,
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Mahatma
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Mandir
. It
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IELTS essay Describe the Place Where You Work Or Which You Often Visit

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
165 words
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