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Please share with us in detail why you want to join AIESEC.

Please share with us in detail why you want to join AIESEC. 866VB
I was so overwhelmed when I knew about the AISEC organization. If I had to say, it would be an out-going environment, along with a number of professional people. As I mentioned above, I participated in 3 activities in high school and also in the university which gave me a chance to enhance my soft skill and changed my perspective about life. there is a puzzle of my dream and I want to continue to fulfill it. Having researched about AIESEC organization according to my friend recommendation, I believe that is what I looking for, AIESEC will pave the way for me to continue to extend my knowledge about the mission they give to the youth.
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organization. If I had to say, it would be an out-going environment, along with a number of professional
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. As I mentioned above, I participated in 3 activities in high school and
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in the university which gave me a chance to enhance my soft
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my perspective about life.
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is a puzzle of my dream and I want to continue to fulfill it. Having researched about AIESEC organization according to my friend recommendation, I believe
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for, AIESEC will pave the way for me to continue to extend my knowledge about the mission they give to the youth.

IELTS essay Please share with us in detail why you want to join AIESEC.

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