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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. RE08
The given layouts of a university's sports centre compare the changes between the current plan and the plan after redevelopment. Overall, there are a lot of changes going to take place after redevelopment but the swimming pool, reception, changing room and seatings are going to remain the same as now. At present, there is a 25m pool in the middle of the sports centre. Beside the pool, there is a seating area on the east side and changing room on the west side. There are two outdoor courts on both the east and west side of the sports centre. Reception is present at the entrance. The gym is located on the northern side of the pool. In the future, the pool is going to remain unchanged and so are the changing room, seating area and reception. The gym will be expanded around by double its previous size. Outdoor courts present on western side will be replaced by a leisure pool. Two dance studios will be constructed on the eastern side. Also, two changing rooms will be made one in the south-west and another in the south-east. Outdoor courts in the east side will be replaced sports hall. Finally, a cafe and a sports are planned near both sides of the entrance.
The
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given
layouts of a university's
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sports
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centre
compare the
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changes
between the
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current
plan and the plan after redevelopment.

Overall
, there are
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a lot of
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changes
going to take place after redevelopment
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but
the swimming
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pool
, reception,
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changing
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room
and
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seatings
are going to remain the same as
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now
.

At present, there is a
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25m
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pool
in the middle of the
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sports
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centre
. Beside the
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pool
, there is a seating area on the east side and
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changing
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room
on the west side. There are two outdoor courts on both the east and west side of the
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sports
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centre
. Reception is present at the entrance. The gym
is located
on the northern side of the pool.

In the future, the
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pool
is going to remain unchanged and
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so
are the
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changing
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room
, seating area and reception. The gym will
be expanded
around by double its previous size. Outdoor courts present on western side will
be replaced
by a leisure
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pool
. Two dance studios will
be constructed
on the eastern side.
Also
, two
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changing
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rooms
will
be made
one in the south-west and another in the south-east. Outdoor courts in the east side will
be replaced
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sports
hall.
Finally
, a
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cafe
and a
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sports
are planned
near both
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sides
of the entrance.
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IELTS essay The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
211 words
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