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Talk about marriage in your country you should include your answer marriage.

Talk about marriage in your country you should include your answer marriage. W9gN
Totally there is no definite age for married, when the girl and boy get familiar with each other and the boy proposes the girl to marry and there are various marriages in Iran such as arranged marriages or marriage of convenience although, predominant these days’ boys and girls prefer to choose their labors and after that, when the parents are getting union about the dowry, portion, alimony and matrimony life they boys and girl are spouses then they try to Provide the necessary prerequisites before marriage. Then, the wedding party is usually held at nights and there are a best man and bridesmaid help the groom and bride, respec
Totally
there is no
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definite
age for married, when the
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girl
and
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boy
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get
familiar with each other and the
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boy
proposes the
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girl
to marry and there are various marriages in Iran such as arranged marriages or marriage of convenience although, predominant these days’
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
and
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girls
prefer to choose their labors and after that, when the parents are getting union about the dowry, portion, alimony and matrimony life they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girl
are spouses then they try to Provide the necessary prerequisites
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before
marriage.

Then, the wedding party is
usually
held at nights and there are
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a
best
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man
and bridesmaid
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help
the groom and bride,
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IELTS essay Talk about marriage in your country you should include your answer marriage.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
108 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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