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the plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

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The following plans illustrate the layout of the University sports centre at the present moment and the way it will look after reconstruction. According to the new layout, the redeveloped sports centre is going to become bigger. First, the gym is going to be larger and an additional changing room is going to appear. Besides, there is going to be a sports shop and a cafe in the reception zone. Apart from that, 2 dance studios are going to work opposite the gym. Finally, the sports centre is going to get a new leisure pool. It is going to be located in the place where the outdoor courts used to be. As can be seen from the new layout, both outdoor courts are going to be replaced by other facilities in the renovated sports centre Furthermore, a sports hall is going to appear in the university sports centre. It is also clear from the second layout that the redeveloped sports centre is going to be a fully indoor one.
The following plans illustrate the
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of the University
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centre
at the present moment and the way it will look after reconstruction. According to the new
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layout
, the redeveloped
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sports
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centre
is going to become bigger.
First
, the gym is going to be larger and an additional changing room is going to appear.
Besides
, there is going to be a
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sports
shop and a
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cafe
in the reception zone. Apart from that, 2 dance studios are going to work opposite the gym.
Finally
, the
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sports
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centre
is going to
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get
a new leisure pool. It is going to
be located
in the place where the outdoor courts
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used
to be. As can be
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seen
from the new
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layout
, both outdoor courts are going to
be replaced
by other facilities in the renovated
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sports
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centre
Furthermore
, a
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sports
hall is going to appear in the university
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sports
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centre
. It is
also
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clear
from the second
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layout
that the redeveloped
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centre
is going to be a
fully
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IELTS essay the plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

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