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The plans below show a theatre in 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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The first picture represents the theatre facility in 2010 whereas, the next picture illustrates the changes that happen in 2012! Let's mention changes that occur within two years. Overall, the size of the theatre is small in size with less facility in 2010 and dramatically numerous changes happened like a new restaurant, restroom facility, and coordination area and also, extended the other rooms in 2012. In 2012 the size of the dressing room split into a coordination area and the stage of the theatre was also extended and attached with a shower facility for staff. While considering there are no changes in the auditorium, but the administrator office and storage rooms are interchanged. Apart from this, the cafe is rebuilt with a new restaurant and the ticket office is relocated next to the main entrances. In conclusion, the cinema theatre had numerous changes like a restaurant, coordination area, and shower facility. Only the other areas are extended and relocated into different places.
The
first
picture represents the
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theatre
facility in 2010 whereas, the
next
picture illustrates the
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changes
that happen in 2012!
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Let
's mention
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changes
that occur within two years.

Overall
, the size of the
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theatre
is
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small in size
with less facility in 2010 and
dramatically
numerous
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changes
happened like a new restaurant, restroom facility, and coordination
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area
and
also
, extended the other rooms in 2012.

In 2012 the size of the dressing room split into a coordination
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area
and the stage of the
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theatre
was
also
extended and attached with a shower facility for staff. While considering there are no
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changes
in the auditorium,
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but
the administrator office and storage rooms
are interchanged
. Apart from this, the
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cafe
is rebuilt with a new restaurant and the ticket office
is relocated
next
to the main entrances.

In conclusion
, the cinema
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theatre
had numerous
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changes
like a restaurant, coordination
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area
, and shower facility.
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Only
the other
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areas
are extended
and relocated into
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different
places.
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IELTS essay The plans below show a theatre in 2010 and 2012.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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