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The plans below show a theatre in 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The plans below show a theatre in 2010 and 2012. XO9q

The first picture represents the theatre facility in 2010 whereas, the next picture illustrates the changes that happen in 2012! Let's mention changes that occur within two years. Overall, the size of the theatre is small in size with less facility in 2010 and dramatically numerous changes happened like a new restaurant, restroom facility, and coordination area and also, extended the other rooms in 2012. In 2012 the size of the dressing room split into a coordination area and the stage of the theatre was also extended and attached with a shower facility for staff. While considering there are no changes in the auditorium, but the administrator office and storage rooms are interchanged. Apart from this, the cafe is rebuilt with a new restaurant and the ticket office is relocated next to the main entrances. In conclusion, the cinema theatre had numerous changes like a restaurant, coordination area, and shower facility. Only the other areas are extended and relocated into different places.

The first
 picture represents the Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.theater
theatre
 facility in 2010 whereas, the next
 picture illustrates the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
changes
 that happen in 2012! This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
's mention You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
changes
 that occur within two years.

Overall
, the size of the Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.theater
theatre
 is A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.small
small in size
 with less facility in 2010 and dramatically
 numerous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
changes
 happened like a new restaurant, restroom facility, and coordination You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 and also
, extended the other rooms in 2012.

In 2012 the size of the dressing room split into a coordination You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 and the stage of the Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.theater
theatre
 was also
 extended and attached with a shower facility for staff. While considering there are no You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
changes
 in the auditorium, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the administrator office and storage rooms are interchanged
. Apart from this, the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 is rebuilt with a new restaurant and the ticket office is relocated
next
 to the main entrances.

In conclusion
, the cinema Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.theater
theatre
 had numerous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
changes
 like a restaurant, coordination You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
, and shower facility. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
Only
 the other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
are extended
 and relocated into This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 places. 