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The plans below show a theatre in 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The plans below show a theatre in 2010 and 2012. K6Mw

The above floor plan delineates a theatre in 2010 and in 2012 after renovations. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there was a general expansion of facilities allowing for both more customer-oriented business and staff activity. In 2010, the smaller theater was centred around a large auditorium (unchanged in 2012) with a large dressing room space behind it and a storage area in the top right corner. By 2012, the storage room had moved to the bottom left corner in favour of an administration office, while the dressing room was repositioned to a smaller room in a new wing of the building on the left side, which also includes a room for showers. Replacing the long dressing room is a coordination area. Near to the entrance, there is now a large restaurant occupying previously empty space and requiring the relocation of the admin and ticket offices (the former is now to the right of the office, displacing a cafe). The main door has remained the same and there are no other alterations since 2010.

The above floor plan delineates a Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.theater
theatre
 in 2010 and in 2012 after renovations. Looking from an overall
 perspective, it is readily
 apparent that there was a general expansion of facilities allowing for both more customer-oriented business and staff activity.

In 2010, the smaller theater was Possible spelling mistake. 'centred' is British English.centered
centred
 around a large auditorium (unchanged in 2012) with a large dressing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 space behind it and a storage area in the top right corner. By 2012, the storage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the bottom This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 corner in Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.favor
favour
 of an administration office, while the dressing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
was repositioned
 to a smaller You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 in a new wing of the building on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side, which also
 includes a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 for showers. Replacing the long dressing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 is a coordination area.

Near to the entrance, there is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 a large restaurant occupying previously empty space and requiring the relocation of the admin and ticket offices (the former is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 to the right of the office, displacing a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
). The main door has remained the same and there are no other alterations since 2010. 