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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where reverent.

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. kY5we

A glance at the plans provided highlight the changes of the Grange park between 1920 and present. Looking from an overall perspective, the park has not only modified the place of seats and garden but also increased a number of facilities, including Amphitheatre for concerts, café, play area of children, water feature and entrance of underground parking lot. To be more specific, in 1920, visitors were allowed to enter the park from entrances, located in the north and south, sit on the Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street separately, but there has expanded the extra one for parking space. The fountain was the center of the park in 1920 and it was replaced by rose garden and surrounded seats now. Besides, the stage for musicians was adjusted as Amphitheatre for concerts nowadays. Moreover, one of the rose garden sitting at the south side of stage for musicians originally was demolished, and another one, arranged next to pond, has shifted by café. Additionally, pond for water plants and greenhouse have expanded as children’s play area and water feature respectively today.

A glance at the plans provided highlight the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 of the Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 between 1920 and present.

Looking from an overall
 perspective, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 modified the place of seats and garden This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 increased a number of facilities, including Possible spelling mistake. 'Amphitheatre' is British English.Amphitheater
Amphitheatre
 for concerts, café, play area of children, water feature and entrance of underground parking lot.

To be more specific, in 1920, visitors were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to enter the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 from entrances, located in the north and south, sit on the Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street separately
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there has expanded the extra one for parking space. The fountain was the center of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 in 1920 and it was replaced
 by rose garden and surrounded seats This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. Besides
, the stage for musicians was adjusted
 as Possible spelling mistake. 'Amphitheatre' is British English.Amphitheater
Amphitheatre
 for concerts nowadays.

Moreover
, one of the rose garden sitting at the south side of stage for musicians originally
was demolished
, and another one, arranged next
 to pond, has shifted by café. Additionally
, pond for water plants and greenhouse have expanded as children’s play area and water feature respectively
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
. 