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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today W9de
The illustration which has been represented below, gives a set of exhaustive information on how Grange park’s configuration and its various segments have demolished, relocated, and changed during a century, starting in 1920 and ending in 2020. At first, it’s considerable that the two main entrances which sit top and bottom of the park, are not moved and put aside from relocating and still posses their former location in Arnold and Eldon respectively. Beside two indicated entrances, another on has been added for cars at lower right-hand of the complex and the rose garden placed on the left side of park, follow the same procedure like the walk entrances. On the other hand, all seats and the remaining rose gardens have been placed in the middle of the park’s campus which the fountain used to be seen there. At last, it worth mentioning that the musicians’ stage has thrived an expanded to Amphitheater so it’s logical to declare, the park has been decorated professionally in such way to be praised.
The illustration which has
been represented
below, gives a set of exhaustive information on how Grange
park’s
configuration and its various segments have demolished, relocated, and
changed
during a century, starting in 1920 and ending in 2020.

At
first
, it’s considerable that the two main entrances which sit top and bottom of the
park
, are not
moved
and put aside from relocating and
still
posses their former location in Arnold and Eldon
respectively
. Beside two indicated entrances, another on has been
added
for cars at lower right-hand of the complex and the rose garden placed on the
left
side of
park
, follow the same procedure
like
the walk entrances.
On the other hand
, all seats and the remaining rose gardens have
been placed
in the middle of the
park’s
campus which the fountain
used
to be
seen
there.

At last,
it worth
mentioning that the musicians’ stage has thrived an expanded to Amphitheater
so
it’s logical to declare, the
park
has
been decorated
professionally
in such way to
be praised
.
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IELTS essay The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today

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