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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today MRg9

The plans illustrate how the structure of the Grange park have changed since 1920. It is noticeable that there were main various changes into its infrastructure even though some facilities remained stable there. We can see that the entrances of the park were fixed without any alteration although merely one novel entrance on the right down which is so-called the entrance underground car park. Furthermore, the center of the park has been altered to the rose garden with four seats around it in place of fountain. Hence, it is café that has been placed instead of the rose garden on the top right, and actually, one of them has been removed on the down left. Additionally, areas were constructed for children’s play and also for the water feature instead of the pond for water plants and the glasshouse roughly on the right, respectively. The only change that was happened on the left side is the amphitheater for concert has been replaced.

The plans illustrate how the structure of the Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 since 1920. It is noticeable that there were main various This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 into its infrastructure even though
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some
 facilities remained stable there.

We can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that the entrances of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 without any alteration although merely
 one novel entrance on the right down which is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
-called the entrance underground car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. Furthermore
, the center of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has been altered
 to the rose garden with four seats around it in place of fountain. Hence
, it is café that has been placed
instead
 of the rose garden on the top right, and actually, one of them has been removed
 on the down This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
.

Additionally
, areas were constructed
 for children’s play and also
 for the water feature instead
 of the pond for water plants and the glasshouse roughly on the right, respectively
. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 that was happened
 on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side is the amphitheater for concert has been replaced
. 