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The plan show the site of airport now and how will it look like after revelopment

The plan show the site of airport now and how will it look like after revelopment p1nPa

These architecture drawings are comparing the southwest airport site, before and after a year long renovation project. All things considered, these developments will be made for improving the efficiency of airport so that more passengers can be handled at large capacity and also the improved facilities will raise their satisfaction level. In the first place, the departures and arrival doors will be doubled. Then, the check-in will be moved to right, old cafe will be moved to left besides doors and a bag drop point will be added at the earlier place of check-in. Adding further, security, passport control and customs will remain at same positions even after these changes. Apparently, multiple shops will be added which will provide duty free products and the earlier walkway will be replaced by a sky train to provide comfort. What’s more, the gates will be increased from 8 to 18 in a wing like structure. Finally, a new cafe, an ATM machine and a car hire point will be added in arrival lounge so that, newly landed travellers would not face any hurdle for moving around in the city.

These architecture drawings are comparing the southwest airport site, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and after a year long renovation project.

All things considered, these developments will be made
 for improving the efficiency of airport This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that more passengers can be handled
 at large capacity and also
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 facilities will raise their satisfaction level.

In the first
 place, the departures and arrival doors will be doubled
. Then, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
-in will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to right, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
besides
 doors and a bag drop point will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 at the earlier place of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
-in. Adding further
, security, passport control and customs will remain at same positions even after these This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
.

Apparently
, multiple shops will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 which will provide 'duty free' seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: "duty-free".duty-free
duty free
 products and the earlier walkway will be replaced
 by a sky train Did you mean "providing"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.providing
to provide
 comfort. What’s more, the gates will be increased
 from 8 to 18 in a wing like structure. Finally
, a new 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
, an This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply "ATM".ATM
ATM machine
 and a car hire point will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in arrival lounge This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that, newly
 landed Possible spelling mistake found.travelers
travellers
 would not face any hurdle for moving around in the city. 