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The plan below show the layout of a university’s sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The plan below show the layout of a university’s sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Bq2a
The following plans illustrate the layout of a university’s sports centre in the present, and how it would be reconstructing in the future. According to the new plan of development, the centre is going to be bigger and more modern. First, the place of the gym will not change but it will get bigger and spacious. Also, it is going to have sports shop and café in reception zone which is become roomier. Moreover, on the place of the two outdoor courts are planned to reconstruct in other type of facilities - new sports hall and a leisure pool with an attach changing room on the west side. Apart from this, two dance studios will be built on the east side of the centre and another large changing room next to them. It is also clear from future reconstruction layout that whole new reconstruction university’s sport centre will be indoor only.
The following plans illustrate the layout of a university’s
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sports
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centre
in the present, and how it would be reconstructing in the future.

According to the new plan of development, the
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centre
is going to be bigger and more modern.
First
, the place of the gym will not
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change
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but
it will
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get
bigger and spacious.
Also
, it is going to have
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sports
shop and café in reception zone which
is become
roomier.
Moreover
, on the place of the two outdoor courts
are planned
to reconstruct in other type of facilities
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-
new
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sports
hall and a leisure pool with an
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attach
changing room on the west side. Apart from this, two dance studios will
be built
on the east side of the
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centre
and another large changing room
next
to them. It is
also
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clear
from future reconstruction layout that whole new reconstruction university’s
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sport
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centre
will be indoor
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only
.
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IELTS essay The plan below show the layout of a university’s sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

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