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The piecharts illustrate the causes that civilians prefer bicycle or car to commute their siteOverall, health and fitness and less pollution are major reasons for cycling while comfort is prominent reason to prefer car. To begin with, faster than driving and no costs are least preferable reasons for cycling, which are roughly above one tenth. The causes for people choose cycling are health and fitness and less pollution just below one third. No parking problem is the reason where 15℅ prefer cycling. In addition, the small proportion from the cause is safer than cycling where people choose driving for work. Faster than cycling and need to carry things to work have similae ratio which is 14℅. Moreover, reason for distance to work just over one fifth people prefer. The majority of people select driving for comfort which is 40%.

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