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The pictures show the changes of a park from 1980 to the present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The pictures show the changes of a park from 1980 to the present day. exqV

The pictures, shows how the park is renewed from the year 1980 to the present. Overall, the infrastructure of the park has changed a lot, which one can notice. Firstly, in the year 1980 there was only one road which divides the park in two parts, which now changed with four roads, with a junction at the centre. There was a wall at the south end of the park, which has been removed at present in the park. Secondly, coming to the place for the people to have a picnic, which is not present in the year 1980. There has left some space for children to play football, however, in the year 1980 that area is used to plant some flowers Lastly, there are no significant changes on the left sides of the park. There are 4 benches with a pool of water, which now replaced with the three benches. Top corner is left behind with small grass in it.

The pictures, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 how the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
is renewed
 from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1980 to the present. Overall
, the infrastructure of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 a lot, which one can notice.

Firstly
, in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1980 there was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one road which divides the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 in two parts, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 with four roads, with a junction at the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. There was a wall at the south This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, which has been removed
 at present in the park.

Secondly
, coming to the place for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to have a picnic, which is not present in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1980. There has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 space for children to play football, however
, in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1980 that area is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to plant This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphflowers.flowers!flowers?flowers:flowers,flowers;
flowers


Lastly
, there are no significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 sides of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. There are 4 benches with a pool of water, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 replaced with the three benches. Top corner is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 behind with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 grass in it. 