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Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays the environment is suffered a lot due to the development of industrialization. The environmental current problems are global warming and acid rain, polluted air. Most people do not care enough about environmental issues I partially agree with this statement. All people are busy in our own life so they do not even look for these problems. but some people are very serious about environmental issues. human beings are not aware of environmental issues because they are not seeing any direct impact on daily life that's why human beings are not serious about these issues; changing in the environment is very slow. the industry owners are cutting trees for industrialization. humans are destroying the environment, can go and use more and more plastic for their own convenience and comfort. Mand kinds are not aware of long-term visual on the environmental issues. for example in a cold area like Himachal Pradesh and Kasmir ice melting quickly and the cause of water melting is flooding. on other hand, Social environment NGOs are very hard working on environmental issues. There are a lot of volunteers are working on these issues and running awareness campaigns. And given information and live demo station on the recycling process and given advice to other people to more and more items are recycled. Seeing a good impact on the Citizens. thanks to social media are showing an effect on the environment and spread awareness among peoples. some human kinds are run cleaning campaign collect bottles and plastics and recycles those items. Some humans are planting more and more trees for the betterment of the environment. conclude, some human beings are not aware of long-term environmental issues and do not see any direct impact. so these humans do not care about the environment. on other hand few of mankind are aware and more serious about environmental issues. so they are working on the solutions and spreading awareness among people.
Nowadays the
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environment
is suffered
a lot due to the development of industrialization. The
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environmental
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current
problems are global warming and acid rain, polluted air. Most
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people
do not care
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enough
about
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environmental
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issues
I
partially
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agree
with this statement. All
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people
are busy in our
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own
life
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so
they do not even look for these problems.
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but
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some
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people
are
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very
serious about
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environmental
issues.

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human
beings are not
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aware
of
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environmental
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issues
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because
they are not seeing any direct impact on daily life that's why
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human
beings are not serious about these
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issues
; changing in the
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environment
is
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very
slow.
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the
industry owners are cutting trees for industrialization.
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humans
are destroying the
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environment
, can go and
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use
more and more plastic for their
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own
convenience and comfort.
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Mand
kinds are not
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aware
of long-term visual on the
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environmental
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issues
.
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for
example in a
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cold
area like Himachal Pradesh and
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Kasmir
ice melting
quickly
and the cause of water melting is flooding.

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on
other hand, Social
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environment
NGOs are
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very
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hard working
on
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environmental
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issues
. There are
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a lot of
volunteers are working on these
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issues
and running awareness campaigns. And
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given
information and
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live
demo station on the recycling process and
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given
advice to other
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people
to more and more items
are recycled
. Seeing a
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good
impact on the Citizens.
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thanks
to social media are showing an effect on the
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environment
and spread awareness among
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peoples
.
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some
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human
kinds
are run
cleaning campaign collect bottles and plastics and recycles those items.
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Some
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humans
are planting more and more trees for the betterment of the environment.

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conclude
,
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some
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human
beings are not
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aware
of long-term
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environmental
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issues
and do not
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see
any direct impact.
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so
these
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humans
do not care about the
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environment
.
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on
other hand few of mankind are
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aware
and more serious about
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environmental
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issues
.
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so
they are working on the solutions and spreading awareness among
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people
.
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IELTS essay Most people do not care enough about environmental issues.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
320 words
5.5
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