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The picture shows preparation of instant noodles

The picture shows preparation of instant noodles r8wmL

The illustration elucidates a process by which how to manufacture instant noodles commercially. This procedure includes 8 steps. At a cursory glance, manufacturing begins when flour is received from storage silos and ends by labelling the noodles cups. Initially, flour is collected from storage silos and this is mixed with oil and water before putting on top of a roller. In the next steps, the mixture is rolled to make dough sheets with the help of roller. Then, the sheets are stripped to make noodle disc. Eventually, cooking oli is added to the noodle discs and keep for drying. Once these oiled noodles are dried, vegetables and spices are added to it, in the following stage. Since these items are manufactured for commercial sales, the container of the product is a cup. In the final stage, the instant noodles are put into cups. Then these cups are sealed and labelled before sending to the delivery outlets

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noodles
commercially
. This procedure includes 8 steps.

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noodles
 cups.

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 of roller. Then, the sheets are stripped
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noodle
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keep
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