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The picture provided illustrates numerous significant changes in Riverage college over 30 years period.

The picture provided illustrates numerous significant changes in Riverage college over 30 years period. 2xBmM

Overall, it is noticeable that the college has been substantially changed, with some new additional features being added to the site and a number of rooms being converted for different uses. The facilities that have not been altered in both size and location on the site are the Sports Hall, Library, and Reception. The terrace has located between the Sports Hall and library still remains, while the flower garden and old car parking have been replaced by steps and trees respectively. A huge Art classroom has been constructed in the space of the previous four offices above the reception, which have been combined into a larger office present been located on the first floor above the library where was the refectory. There are two constructions that have been built, once is the Café has now converted from the Common room and another new one underneath the Reception which used as a Music room.

Overall
, it is noticeable that the college has been substantially
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
, with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 new additional features being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the site and a number of rooms being converted
 for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
uses
.

The facilities that have not been altered
 in both size and location on the site are the Sports Hall, Library, and Reception. The terrace has located between the Sports Hall and library still
 remains, while the flower garden and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 car parking have been replaced
 by steps and trees respectively
.

A huge Art classroom has been constructed
 in the space of the previous four offices above the reception, which have been combined
 into a larger office present been located
 on the first
 floor above the library where was the refectory. There are two constructions that have been built
, once is the Café has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 converted from the Common room and another new one underneath the Reception which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 as a Music room. 