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The picture illustrates the various stages in the life of the silkworm.

The picture illustrates the various stages in the life of the silkworm. q0jd5

The picture illustrates the various stages in the life of the silkworm. Overall, the whole procedure consists of 4 stages, beginning with the laying of eggs and ending with the final stage as an adult moth. At the first stage of the life cycle, eggs are laid by an adult moth on a mulberry leaf. After a period of 10 days, the silkworm larvae emerge from the eggs and begin to feed on mulberry leaves. Next, about 4 to 6 weeks later of the procedure become a moth, the larvae start to become covered in silk thread. Then, once the larvae are completely covered in the silk thread, which takes between 3 to 8 days, a cocoon is formed. At the final stage, approximately 16 days later, the adult moth emerges from the cocoon. Obviously, the adult moth will lay eggs on mulberry leaves again, and the life cycle of the silkworm is still happening according to the laws of nature.

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At the first
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stage
 of the life cycle, eggs are laid
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moth
 on a mulberry leaf. After a period of 10 days, the silkworm larvae emerge from the eggs and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
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leaves
. Next
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moth
, the larvae This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to become covered in silk thread.

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between 3 to 8
 days, a cocoon is formed
. At the final You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, approximately 16 days later, the adult You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtickverminpestmitebeebutterfly
moth
 emerges from the cocoon. Obviously
, the adult You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtickverminpestmitebeebutterfly
moth
 will lay eggs on mulberry This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
 again, and the life cycle of the silkworm is still
 happening according to the laws of nature. 