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Impact of Television (TV) on Children – Positive and Negative Effects

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In this concurrent world, it is undoubtedly true that television play povital role in everyone's life. Some people concur that television is harmful for health. As it spoil studies the children's because they watch television whole day. However, I quibble from them and propound that it is very helpful in day to day life. Adequate evidences are obtainable to substantiate the concept of television is harmful to us. The top-notch concrete reason is we can come to know what is happening around the world through the news channel. Another rationale which hauls me to patron is communication skill. with help of television we learn different-different communication skill. The rearmost coherent factor to be considered which cannot be neglected is to learn different dishes. we can learn to make delicious dishes, dessert, etc. To uphold my notion, I would quote an instance of my friend, who learnd
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television
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concur that
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is harmful for health. As it spoil studies the children's
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whole day.
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and
propound that it is
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helpful in day to day life.

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television
is harmful to us. The top-notch concrete reason is we can
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come
to know what is happening around the world through the news channel. Another

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.
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help
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we learn
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different
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different
communication
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. The rearmost coherent factor to
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be


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considered
which cannot
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different
dishes.
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we
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make
delicious dishes, dessert, etc. To uphold my notion, I would quote an instance of my friend, who
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learnd
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IELTS essay Impact of Television (TV) on Children – Positive and Negative Effects

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
145 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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