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The picture illustrates the various stages in the life of a Monarch Butterfly.

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The picture illustrates the various stages in the life of a Monarch Butterfly. Overall, it is clear that there are whole procedure consists of 6 stages, beginning when eggs are laid and ending with the adult butterfly. At the first stage, the Monarch Butterfly lays eggs on the leaves of a plant. Then, a larva or caterpillar emerges from the egg and begins to feed on the leaves. The next stage is a period when the larva continues feeding and then attaches itself to the plant. The fourth stage takes place when the larva is transformed into a chrysalis, which is still attached to the leaf of the plant. Inside the chrysalis, further changes take place. After a period of time, a fully-formed butterfly emerges from the chrysalis and begins to feed on the nectar of flowers. Finally, as an adult, the Monarch Butterfly is ready to lay eggs and the cycle will begin again.
The picture illustrates the various
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stages
in the life of a Monarch Butterfly.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that there are whole procedure consists of 6
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stages
, beginning when eggs
are laid
and ending with the adult butterfly.

At the
first
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stage
, the Monarch Butterfly lays eggs on the
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leaves
of a plant. Then, a larva or caterpillar emerges from the egg and
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begins
to feed on the
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leaves
. The
next
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stage
is a period when the larva continues feeding and then attaches itself to the plant.

The fourth
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stage
takes place when the larva
is transformed
into a chrysalis, which is
still
attached to the leaf of the plant. Inside the chrysalis,
further
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changes
take place. After a period of time, a
fully
-formed butterfly emerges from the chrysalis and
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begins
to feed on the nectar of flowers.
Finally
, as an adult, the Monarch Butterfly is ready to lay eggs and the cycle will
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begin
again.
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IELTS essay The picture illustrates the various stages in the life of a Monarch Butterfly.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
155 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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