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The picture illustrates the process of manufacturing tomato ketchup.

The picture illustrates the process of manufacturing tomato ketchup. 6Pq3

The picture illustrates the process of manufacturing tomato ketchup. Overall, there are fifteen main steps to make tomato ketchup from picking tomatoes by the farmer to enjoy it with dish. At the first step of the process, tomatoes are picked from the field and put in the basket. Next classify tomatoes in to two groups according to features that have in quality. After that, it will be sent to factory to start the process of making products. In the factory, tomatoes are removed stalk, seeds and skin, then being crushed until they are become liquid. At the same time, sugar, vinegar and salt are added into the liquid to create variety of tastes for the products. The next step is that the tomato liquid is boiled and then left about 2 hours in order to getting a right temperature. Prior to being packed into the box, the liquid will be poured into bottles, labelled and gone to a process of quality control for the final check. Finally, the products will be delivered to supermarkets and customers buy them to enjoy with hamburger and fries.

The picture illustrates the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 of manufacturing tomato ketchup. Overall
, there are fifteen main steps to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 tomato ketchup from picking tomatoes by the farmer to enjoy it with dish.

At the first
 step of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
, tomatoes are picked
 from the field and put in the basket. Next
 classify tomatoes in to two groups according to features that have in quality. After that, it will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to factory to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 of making products.

In the factory, tomatoes are removed
 stalk, seeds and skin, then being crushed
 until they are become
 liquid. At the same time, sugar, vinegar and salt are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 into the liquid to create variety of tastes for the products. The next
 step is that the tomato liquid is boiled
 and then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 about 2 hours in order to Did you mean "get"?get
getting
 a right temperature. Prior to being packed
 into the box, the liquid will be poured
 into bottles, labelled and gone to a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 of quality control for the final This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
. Finally
, the products will be delivered
 to supermarkets and customers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 them to enjoy with hamburger and fries. 