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The picture illustrates information about how to manufacture carbonated drinks.

The picture illustrates information about how to manufacture carbonated drinks. Looking at the picture, it is immediately apparent that there are five main stages in producing carbonated drinks. The process begins with cleaning the water and ends at the packaging stage. At the first stage of producing carbonated drinks, the water from households is cleaned by filtering and then softening in chemical materials. After this stage has been completed, the water is pumped into a heater, which is powered by electricity, then it is cooled through a small pipe. During this process, carbon dioxide from another tube is added to the water. Then the water goes through a small long pipe to a tank, in which it is mixed with coloring, syrup, and flavor materials and filtered for the second time before being filled into bottles and cans. Finally, these carbonated drinks are packed into boxes, and they are delivered to supermarkets to sell them to customers.

The picture illustrates information about how to manufacture You use this word too often, consider replacing it witheffervescent
carbonated
 drinks.

Looking at the picture, it is immediately apparent that there are five main stages in producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it witheffervescent
carbonated
 drinks. The process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 with cleaning the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 and ends at the packaging stage.

At the first
 stage of producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it witheffervescent
carbonated
 drinks, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 from households is cleaned
 by filtering and then softening in chemical materials. After this stage has been completed
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is pumped
 into a heater, which is powered
 by electricity, then it is cooled
 through a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 pipe. During this process, carbon dioxide from another tube is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the water.

Then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 goes through a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 long pipe to a tank, in which it is mixed
 with coloring, syrup, and flavor materials and filtered for the second time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being filled
 into bottles and cans.

Finally
, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it witheffervescent
carbonated
 drinks are packed
 into boxes, and they are delivered
 to supermarkets to sell them to customers. 