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The picture gives information about how electricity is produced in a nuclear power station.

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The picture gives information about how electricity is produced in a nuclear power station. Overview, it is clear that, there are 11 steps to produce electricity in nuclear power station such as containment building, steam (generators also pipes), uranium fuel, turbine, generator, transformer, cooling (tower, water source and water) and the last one is electricity. First step is containment building to produce electricity, in this level contain second, third and fourth steps. Before electricity moves to the generator it should past from Turbine level. The next step is transformer which takes electricity from the generator. Following level will be cooling tower which keeps cold water also it takes water from the cooling water source. The tenth level is cooling water, it helps to work turbine step. The last one is electricity level. In this step electricity has to move from the transformer directly without passing eighth, ninth and tenth levels.
The picture gives information about how
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electricity
is produced
in a nuclear power station.

Overview, it is
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clear
that, there are 11
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steps
to produce
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electricity
in nuclear power station such as containment building, steam (generators
also
pipes), uranium fuel, turbine, generator, transformer,
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cooling
(tower,
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water
source and
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water)
and the last one is electricity.

First
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step
is containment building to produce
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electricity
, in this
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level
contain second, third and fourth
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steps
.
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Before
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electricity
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moves
to the generator it should past from Turbine
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level
. The
next
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step
is transformer which takes
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electricity
from the generator. Following
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level
will be
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cooling
tower which
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keeps
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cold
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water
also
it takes
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water
from the
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cooling
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water
source. The tenth
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level
is
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cooling
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water
, it
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helps
to work turbine
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step
. The last one is
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electricity
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level
. In this
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step
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electricity
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has to
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move
from the transformer
directly
without passing eighth, ninth and tenth
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levels
.
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IELTS essay The picture gives information about how electricity is produced in a nuclear power station.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
150 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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